The face expression is depicted nice, it looks good at first glance, but there are some mistakes that will not be forgiven in the future, even if you just wanna post them in some deep deep corners of the internet.
make the top of the head more circly, not with a lump, please.
and make your lines connect with the same density. for example your hair edges are all over the place. Try to draw the connecting lines in one go and fast, that will help(go yolo mode cuz thats a tablet and tablets are very forgiving.
the focuses of the two eyes are not the same, its not taht noticable, but if you do notice it you cant unsee it.
but I dont really draw anime style things soo, u might be like " who the fuck care about this fgt opinion" but the mistakes i pointed out are like global things so pls take note of them if u want.
-----
Oh, sorry i just found out that you just started, sorry for the nitpicking i did, you did good if you are just beginning, just keep drawing and you'll bound to git gud
Last edited by RuriroNeko; Sep 15, 2015 at 04:56 AM.
Reason: <24 hour edit/bump