Originally Posted by
Assoi98
Hi my name is Assoi98
I live in Italy(GMT +0), i speak Italian,English and a little bit of French.
I'm 15 years old, my hobby are football and F1(fan of Ferrari Team).
I'm a good, active, loyal, funny and mature player, i'm 3rd dan black belt, and i have played this game about 1 year
my favourite/best mod are: aikido,ABD,xspar,taekkyon,runkido and ninjitsu
i have a infractions for useless post (0 points and was happened when i was a beginner).
my past clans are: Shade,Legend,Fyre,Metal,Force-a-Nature(i was the leader),Pure,Gryphon.
I'm a Sparrer(not so much good like Swexx,Obazu,Mocucha but i'm learning much and fast).
I have learned how to move in toribash in a couple of month, when i was a brown belt my old ranks was 64.
I haven't special skills about video,art and marketing (i have made a video of toribash and it is on youtube but is a simple video if you want to watch it there is the link http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kgn4iJ3TupI
I haven't nothing to add so i hope you like me and my application.
There are some of my best replay enjoy it =):
Thanks for the attentions
Assoi98
Instead of criticizing your lack of correct grammar I will criticize your application.
As Toxik said, this clan hardly plays this game; in fact, at times I forget this is supposed to be a playable game. Your ingame skill will give you nothing but kudos, it's just part of the package if we accept you.
Your app was extremely, and I mean extremely ordinary. Overdone format, shows lack of effort.
Example:
Name:
GMT:
Languages:
Hobbies:
Stuff you're good at:
It doesn't take long to exit the comfort zone and make something nice, although this may be lacking because your bad English.
I'm going to have to say no. It seems that was the most popular choice anyway, I just felt that I should give you more information why not.