Lionet:
Papercut V2
Overall it still looks good, a nice idea executed nicely. But its flaws are very exposed: twitches there and there, confused movement on the beggining and stiffness in some parts.
I will comment each part:
Twitches: I can see some twitches in some frames as 471(your leg), 461(your arm), 281(your arm again). Try to move for one frame and relax the next, it can reduce twitches sometimes but i don't reccommend for dismembers and stuff.
Confused movement: on the beggining you suddenly change from a left rotation to a right, this wouldn't be a problem if you executed it more smoothly. Here it looked like you wanted to go "this way" but changed last moment.
Another time it happens are around the scissor-kick, your arms lose its smooth and goes weird for a moment.
Stiffness: 338 and 263. Just try to go smoother, relax more.
These are just the flaws, but there are good things on it:
You executed the idea nicely, your setup is veru good would say.
The skeet was sick. The lift-kick looked pretty good(plus the setup) and the scissor is really pretty.
but yeah thats pretty much it. by the way i preffer the pose 1, it just seems to fit more it. you're doing pretty good man.
I just won't comment on parkours because it's something i am really not good at....
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since i haven't posted much replays in this board, here's one i've just made
Last edited by victortb; Jan 27, 2018 at 03:46 AM.
Reason: <24 hour edit/bump