you know what they say, better late than never
i still suck at dms
i still suck at dms was a pretty short and sweet replay, I like the movement a lot.
everything from the start to the first kick looked pretty good in my opinion
The second rotation, after the first kick felt a bit slow towards the end, which made it look a bit awkward and out of place.
the last kick looked pretty bad in my opinion, because of the angle you choose to kick from.
although this replay wasnt bad at all it just feels like a worse version of bisonics carousel replay.
going for basic concepts such as this is totally ok but you'd have to execute them extremely well and/or add something unique for it to stand out among the rest.
so what now dude
I like that you started the replay in 100 ed, that's pretty rare nowadays.
the kicks in this replay were a lot better angled and looked more powerful.
finishing the replay with a decap skeet from a close distance is something that i've seen a ton of by now but because you decided to use his thigh instead of your own hand made it a little bit less standard of an ending.
there was a little bit of twitching going on in this replay but the main issue I had was that in 385 it looked like you were going for a manip but accidentally dm'd his knee.
having something in your replay looking like you did not intend to do is usually a pretty bad thing in my opinion
but yeah overall this replay was pretty good and compared to the first replay it was a lot less basic and managed to catch my attention a lot more.
a tip for the future is to grab the object you are trying to skeet with this part of the hand, it makes it a lot easier to aim the skeet and looks way better
wtf bro
the knee twitch at bothered me a little bit 468, i think it would've looked better if you waited a few more frames to extend the knee, both because it would look less twitchy and because you would've gained more power.
the 2 first kicks were pretty neat, they both put you in a better spot and lifted uke at the same time, gj
the following hit in 348 was good as well, it gave uke a decent bit of momentum without runing yours too much, the one afterwards however ruined yours
at 284 you almost stopped uke in the air, it looks pretty lame when a manip hit slows uke down instead of giving or maintaining his speed.
same deal with 240 and your left hand at 176, this replay would've been way better if you focused as much on how uke moves as your tori
the kick combo in the end looked good, so did your movement
im unfortunately going to say no because it feel like you're good but you dont bother focusing on details or try making your replays stand out.
if you did and applied again im sure you'd be able to get in easy peasy
im pretty tired so dont hesitate to hit me up in case i missed something or anything was unclear o7