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[Event] Best Rapper Alive
There can only be one.
Rules
Make a rap at least 20 lines long, about anything. It cannot be stolen, it must be made just for this purpose.
If it doesn't make sense, it has no chance of winning.
Only one winner will be chosen.
You can only submit one rap.
Judges
Mwah
assassin8r
Varkenoss
Prizes
A random item and 10k and a gangsta head
Ends
July 3rd
Be the best, or go down like the rest.
Good luck
Last edited by mWah; Jul 1, 2010 at 09:23 PM.
teeth marks on my goosebumps, the chains frostbit me.
Just open your eyes,
And realize,
These real lies,
From tragic eyes,
Against smoke filled skies,
Where bravery has died,
Where fear was cried,
It hurts inside,
Breathing Cyanide,
This sweet suicide,
I must confide,
I promise I tried,
Though I must decide,
To be by your side,
Though you step aside,
Blissfully Dignified,
You were un-denied,
Hence death implied,
Your actions misguide,
It was unverified,
Though pain does not subside,
Breathing Cyanide,
O' This sweet suicide.
And realize,
These real lies,
From tragic eyes,
Against smoke filled skies,
Where bravery has died,
Where fear was cried,
It hurts inside,
Breathing Cyanide,
This sweet suicide,
I must confide,
I promise I tried,
Though I must decide,
To be by your side,
Though you step aside,
Blissfully Dignified,
You were un-denied,
Hence death implied,
Your actions misguide,
It was unverified,
Though pain does not subside,
Breathing Cyanide,
O' This sweet suicide.
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Originally Posted by Sangetsu
Everyone, DONT take this personal, im just a bit crazy. I love you all.
alright stop the beat, i got something to say/
I google'd on Hampa and got proof thats he's gay/
Tagknife, nice try stealing others shit/
altho Slycooper you were critically hit/
rapping about toribash and TF2/
Saying your a gangsta and that uke is blue/
in the same text, damn, your not a gangsta your a fake/
just looking at your "rap" gives me an headache/
davidbash, whats your problem, just keep playing THE GAME/
spamming 4chan phrases, omg you are lame/
Hellobob, you just repeated what Mwah said/
just quit the rap and go fap instead/
Jets, i kinda liked your rap it was smooth like sand/
altho rough words, lets hope you dont get B&/
EtheralDemise, or E.D for short/
... you just suck, your mom should've done abort/
pika pika, your a pokemon, not an MC/
if i should say "Get lost" people here should agree/
srsly, fuck you all, noone here is a gangsta/
closest is steve, he is a banksta/
This is Sangetsu speaking/
Dont stand close to me bitch, you're reeking/
Thanks for you time, i bet you only read the half/
Well, atleast im signing off with a laugh.
motherfucker<3
"The best fighter is not a Boxer, Karate or Judo man. The best fighter is someone who can adapt on any style" - Bruce Lee
I'm focused
Dead up
Don't get up, or never let up
Ferocious
I'm fed up
Dismissing the competition
it's hopless,
I'll trash their ambition
Listen...
Ya'll want a class on tradition
On one condition
Forget the best of the century
Ya'll talk about the best of all-time
you better mention me
Essentially, I'm the best there's ever gonna be
I hold my ground
You'll never take it from under me
And up under me, it's gonna be trouble
Hit you so many times,
you see triple and double,
instead of one of me
I got more heart, more ways
to tear you, apart
Lay you down early on
Or maybe in the later round
It's no different to me
You tap out, cash out,
or simply pass out, to breathe
Cause you face down... really
And barely alive, cause I'm an animal inside
Hear me
I'm what the game is supposed to be
Hopefully, you see what I mean
Knock you out, haven't seen
You were beaten by a triple team
Box you out, the whole scene and gleam
The limelight's my dream, I shine bright
Smash you! Front to back,
You gon' need hindsight
In fact, when I attack
You lucky if I leave you intact
I'm prone to overkill
Work you over, til' I steal your motorskills
It's the same whenever I'm done
Your numb toe to thumb
and most can't remember their names
or where they're from
And some speechless, stunned, lookin' deaf and dumb
You're weak like 7 days
Then afraid, I'm amazed ya'll still step up
'Cause I hit more men than Jenna Jameson in better days
Can't clear your heads, you wanted Jenna Haze
You want the man, you got him
And you can spot him, every Thursday night on TNA
It's like a spotlight, and main events in his DNA
"Who you say?" It's Kurt Angle
Beneath you'll settle,
The best in the world
Only guy in the sport with a gold medal
Future fold ends to the center
Physical and mental
Cause he's simply better
Quit playing around with those second attacks
He'll lay you down for a three second nap on the mat,
If staring at the ceiling on your back is appealing
Get yourself a match and you gon' do that
It's a rap, you're trapped in the game
You a rat in a maze
Just amazed how I made my name,
My fame is a runaway train on the tracks
I fight like my life's on the line everynight, in fact
That's why I'm gonna take that strap.
Dead up
Don't get up, or never let up
Ferocious
I'm fed up
Dismissing the competition
it's hopless,
I'll trash their ambition
Listen...
Ya'll want a class on tradition
On one condition
Forget the best of the century
Ya'll talk about the best of all-time
you better mention me
Essentially, I'm the best there's ever gonna be
I hold my ground
You'll never take it from under me
And up under me, it's gonna be trouble
Hit you so many times,
you see triple and double,
instead of one of me
I got more heart, more ways
to tear you, apart
Lay you down early on
Or maybe in the later round
It's no different to me
You tap out, cash out,
or simply pass out, to breathe
Cause you face down... really
And barely alive, cause I'm an animal inside
Hear me
I'm what the game is supposed to be
Hopefully, you see what I mean
Knock you out, haven't seen
You were beaten by a triple team
Box you out, the whole scene and gleam
The limelight's my dream, I shine bright
Smash you! Front to back,
You gon' need hindsight
In fact, when I attack
You lucky if I leave you intact
I'm prone to overkill
Work you over, til' I steal your motorskills
It's the same whenever I'm done
Your numb toe to thumb
and most can't remember their names
or where they're from
And some speechless, stunned, lookin' deaf and dumb
You're weak like 7 days
Then afraid, I'm amazed ya'll still step up
'Cause I hit more men than Jenna Jameson in better days
Can't clear your heads, you wanted Jenna Haze
You want the man, you got him
And you can spot him, every Thursday night on TNA
It's like a spotlight, and main events in his DNA
"Who you say?" It's Kurt Angle
Beneath you'll settle,
The best in the world
Only guy in the sport with a gold medal
Future fold ends to the center
Physical and mental
Cause he's simply better
Quit playing around with those second attacks
He'll lay you down for a three second nap on the mat,
If staring at the ceiling on your back is appealing
Get yourself a match and you gon' do that
It's a rap, you're trapped in the game
You a rat in a maze
Just amazed how I made my name,
My fame is a runaway train on the tracks
I fight like my life's on the line everynight, in fact
That's why I'm gonna take that strap.
All of the entries are great so far.
Since I'm a judge, I'm just going to point out that I enjoy reading raps where the rhyme is the same for a while and then changes once or twice in 20 lines.
Here's an example of what I mean.
Yo they call me the hiphopopotamus
I got clothes that glow like phosphorus
Poppin' off of the top 'o' this
Esophagus.
I'm not a water-dwelling mammal that moved from Africa to the metropolis
Where'd you get that preposterous hypothesis?
I'd enjoy that rather than something like....
Yo I have really long jeans
They sag below my knees
I'm using this as an example
You can call it just a sample if you want.
This is the regular forum font.
Penis rhymes with venus.
Uranus can mean buttocks.
I don't know what rhymes with buttocks.
I hope that I got my point across.
Since I'm a judge, I'm just going to point out that I enjoy reading raps where the rhyme is the same for a while and then changes once or twice in 20 lines.
Here's an example of what I mean.
Yo they call me the hiphopopotamus
I got clothes that glow like phosphorus
Poppin' off of the top 'o' this
Esophagus.
I'm not a water-dwelling mammal that moved from Africa to the metropolis
Where'd you get that preposterous hypothesis?
I'd enjoy that rather than something like....
Yo I have really long jeans
They sag below my knees
I'm using this as an example
You can call it just a sample if you want.
This is the regular forum font.
Penis rhymes with venus.
Uranus can mean buttocks.
I don't know what rhymes with buttocks.
I hope that I got my point across.
<~oyster> i want you to fart near my mouth
