That was a better replay. Your starting so I will list some advices.
*Less akward movements.
*Try to do a better oppener.
*Chose a style for you, Like: Realistic madman, tricky madman, boom aimer madman etc...
*Depending on the style you will have to be more on your foot and don't look like a agonizing worm, or aim for a potential opener and some big booms etc...
PS: I know you are starting, I past for that too. (You remebered of me when I was starting
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I recomend you to learn how to run, that will help you to control tori a way better.
~Tessh