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View Poll Results: What is Liar.
Liar is bad.
36 Votes / 24.83%
Liar is okay.
30 Votes / 20.69%
Liar is good.
79 Votes / 54.48%
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Aye, Here is a collab I did with a good friend friend of mine from ToriBros. (IF ANYONE REMEMBERS THAT) CalmDown09 <3.
Attached Files
#Liar - Calm .rpl (206.0 KB, 27 views)
Replays.
R.I.P Dog | mediocre at best
All in all it was good, the first kick kinda killed the flow, also you shouldn't have grabbed Uke's head-lump when you were juggling it.
opener was stiff and slow
headgrab was 0/10
dms were dm-y
afterwards looked good until you grabbed again
pose was twitchy
11:44 PM - mokoshotar: do you think if i give you a list of bullies at my school you could butterfly jutsu them
Im making a remake of the replay, I want to see if he can do something like this. Since he wants to be a shit-talker.
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Here ya go.
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Calm Remake.rpl (216.5 KB, 21 views)
Last edited by Minerals; Feb 5, 2014 at 11:10 AM. Reason: <24 hour edit/bump
I agree minerals I don't compare to liar and could never make a replay on par with him.
I only wish to point out his flaws so one day he will be perfect like nearly.
11:44 PM - mokoshotar: do you think if i give you a list of bullies at my school you could butterfly jutsu them
Jay, it's alright, he's pointing out mistakes and giving me (not too constructive) feedback. I will hopefully improve from that.
I basically just said the same thing as thiggist...

Also, Jay, the first kick was pretty good the spin thing was ok but the legs looked weird IMO, it went into the pose nicely but the back-kick thing was a nono.
Last edited by Liar; Feb 5, 2014 at 06:37 PM.
Replays.
R.I.P Dog | mediocre at best