Ranking
your movement is fair i suppose

you can move your tori and get it what you want it to do, however i think you should spend more time on your replays

dont settle for "yeah i got a boom!"

you need to improvise more, and ask yourself "how can i make this look better"

basically work on movement, you seem to got dms down

your first replay imo is the best out of the three; the last two are very generic

the second one was smooth, but its been done a lot in the past

for now, its a no

you have potential tho
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tsu tsu cuckoo
Hello
My name is Jonah irl. I am 22. As a replay maker,
I was thinking of joining ORMO. Although I dont have
any manips, skateboarding, Or dancing yet, it's why i want to join.
I think being among other great replay makers would
be really helpful when it comes to gaining insight of
how to go about these skills I am
not yet familiar with.

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Fixed my app,
All SP replays. no collabs.

Sorry for missing some rules.
Attached Files
S_Blue Static.rpl (582.6 KB, 21 views)
S_Shikkuflo.rpl (1.38 MB, 23 views)
S_Palmdale.rpl (200.5 KB, 22 views)
Last edited by Shikkumo; Nov 14, 2016 at 02:03 AM. Reason: App was invalid
~Smoke Weed
Feel pretty dumb for that mistake.
But i hope you still consider my app.

If not, i look forward to applying in
1 month from now.
~Smoke Weed
Originally Posted by Shikkumo View Post
Feel pretty dumb for that mistake.
But i hope you still consider my app.

If not, i look forward to applying in
1 month from now.

you are fine
dun worry unless you get rejected
Aadame:I'm very signaturable
It's just no one usues my shit .