Marbas I loved the hair.
Also guys, I'm making this drawing:
(I do not really like twilight, just like the effects)

EDIT:

Reference:

I'm doing this for a girl (I'm interested) she is a big fan, and I want to know,the drawing looks similar the reference?

Dat teeth. (Sorry) Why her teeth not touch bottom of her mouth?
How to draw mouth

And her eyes not point at man. She looking me.
How to draw eyes

Yes, I'm trying to fix it, but every time I try, get worse.
And thanks for Cnc.

proportions are a bit fucked up there xd Eyes should be a bit higher and the aw of the man ends up bladesharp under the ear

i liked more the facial expression in the first stage
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in the second stage somehow she look disgusted

Thank you chicken, maybe later I'll try your changes.
I tryed "Chris changes":

Looks better?
Omg I found this:

I think just de mouth and teeth still strange:

Take as a example, then. Look how dark your eyes are... That black shadow on the nose...

Thanks Razasha, I like the way you made the hair aye.
The one thing that bothers me is the nose, the shadow on the right is too dark and too close to the middle
But it's looking great

She still looking at me!

still looks like it's floating.