Whale: i'm a bit undecided on this one. i agree with Static, i liked everything you did but all replays had parts that could use some refining and attention to detail. it's not a huge deal, but when all of them have it i can't help but think that it is a recurring problem.
for example, i really love the decap in the first replay, but i would love it more if you didn't sway your arms up and down in order to aim so precisely. another example is the second replay, around frame 510 you move your arms as if you are swatting flies. it looks like you had them moving one way, but then remembered you needed them moving the other way in order to keep spinning so you moved them immediately to the position you wanted. i think if you went back and edited it more carefully you wouldn't need to make those sudden movements.
i think you are super close, if you iron out those small flaws that seem to appear often in your replays i will say yes, but for now i vote
no.
Emoteen: i thought that was really cool. i say
yes
Originally Posted by
Jodus
p nice advices, so i suppose i'm denied.
And just to be sure, how long should i wait till apply again, one month?
correct, but remember that at no point you should be waiting for the month to pass; all that waiting time should be put into making more replays
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