gramofon: sorry friend its a no, i asked multiple people about their opinion and we came to the same conclusion. i'll give you some cnc though and reasons why you got declined.
lightning: opener could have easily been executed better like at 423 you instantly contract your knee and it didn't look very good. the ankle dm was pretty cool though but then you tried to go for the other ankle it looked like, then you got a knee dm and whatever that's cool (off topic but it might have been a glitch the knee dm didn't look like it happened naturally i tried to edit the frame before and i didn't get it so i think it was a glitch). the dms after that where pretty nice until you get to like frame 284 where it looks like you just relaxed all and it didn't flow with your movement before in the replay so it looked really weird (like how your head bobbed all over the place holy heck) the next hit looked fine and the pose was pretty cool i guess.
all in all a decent replay, imo its still the second best replay in your app.
in general i think you should just work on fine tuning your replays, like how you make stupid mistakes and just don't edit them out like some of the twitches in lightning.
your movement in martyr imo was pretty good and that's why i said you had movement down because i thought your movement was consistently that good. I think you should work on your movement a bit more.
i feel kind of bad asking for you to make another replay and still declining you, sorry bro im just a pooper