So, i got requested to CnC the first replay in this thread so i guess that's what i will do:
The replay was cool, i like that you are stabile through the whole replay and never seem to fall on the side. Though i have a slight problem with how you move your joints, it seems like you are either fully contracting them or fully extending them and when you are not it still seems like a bit too much to one side. i recomend you would use relax alot more, it's what gives the meat to a replay, smoothness is key in parkour, remember that.