I'm loving the crayon-like shading within this one. You could move the face up a little bit. The mouth piece seems to be really low at the moment.

Thanks for the comment aero :> glad you are liking it!!!

and yes I need to redo the mouth

Uprodatu!

finally finished the shading, although I may change something later

Hair is done, but I haven't tested it in game so I don't know how it looks ( If anyone would be so kind and post some screenies, even with watermark, <3 ! )

and I started to color the face first woot woot! what you guys think? Go comment



EDIT: just noticed some flaws above bandana, gonna fix that!!!!!

The eye is too wide ;o
and it hasn't the " Rawr , fuck you I'm a cyborg" look.

well... I kinda don't think it's too wide... :S there is an in game pic on page 3 last post if you haven't checked it, also the eye gets wider so it gets the "rawr" effect, not much,but it does XD

I may change it, if you still think it should be less wide and more angry looking :>

thanks for commenting!

nice so far
Darken the colours to a lil dark platinium colour okay?

Finished:

OH noes
think you can make the hair a little white-er
rather than greenier

Done:



:>

It did turn out just fine but idk about that thing that's covering his eye, for me it looks kinda metalic too