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insert name here: pretty great
good control, opener was okay, the dm's looked nice. felt clean and was pretty impressive.

step one: less impressive. dm wise, it was good but i felt like it lacked a lot in movement

it felt like a sort of average madman , which isn't a bad thing in particular but it would have been a lot better if your movements we're just little more fascinating, something wacky even

wreck 'em with a requiem: everything was great up until the kick

not saying it doesn't look good, but it doesn't look right alone. felt like you ended it too early when you could've added another fascinating touch to it, something extra to catch my eye.

it's going to be no for now. you have the control and sense of dm's, now you just have to get a little fancier with it. simplicity is nice, but i feel like simplicity is more of a conventional thing that mainly looks good in videos