Originally Posted by jclark
I dm uke the whole time- Flow was nice and so was the dms. Movement could have been better though. I mean you weren't stiff but your movement was pretty bad you looked pretty unnatural the whole time.
Lost woods- The opener was really nice, the kick lost some of the flow though. Wish you would have got more dms on the second kick. But really nice replay until you tried to transition to the pose
technical wonder child-Opener was meh, and the transition could have been better and the rest pretty much was just extra. Overall I think that you should try to work on your movements. Get those downpacked and just even out, and you will be fine
movement was ok, Just wish there were more action. there were alot of boring parts as well.
Step one- I think you should try and follow through with your hits, and not just tap. this was kinda bad, nice dms though.
tested- I wish you wouldn't have gone through this so common, The dms were nice but the way you went through with the whole thing was kinda bad :c.
more replays mang
Ok, I'll try to become more creative with replays
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Blasphemy: good concepts, but overall movement is lacking, and hits could be better. They look rushed if you know what I mean
Uke tries to kill me: Its a nice little spar, but movement was choppy at many parts and there little to no smooth movements and transitions
vs: This one is pretty unique, shows a style I haven't really seen before so good job there.
but I'm afraid there isn't anything else in this replay that really stuck out for me, corckscrews were alright, but the choppy movements was a turn off for me.
its going to be a no sorry.
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humshegreshdecap: pretty sweet decap is all I can say really, style was pretty cool as well.
Transition was rather weak though.
split cappy: Opener was strange, wasn't a fan. I thought the transition was smooth though, very good. Split and decap were great and worked well together, but again your transition wasn't the best after that and kinda brought down the replay for me.
peh: I didn't like this one at all to be honest with you, the manip wasn't too good and the decap was alright but nor ormo standards :c
all in all, you have a good style apply it to all you replays! The thing you need to work on most is transitioning because those tend to be stiff and unappealing.
Its going to be a no for now.
Uke tries to kill me: Its a nice little spar, but movement was choppy at many parts and there little to no smooth movements and transitions
vs: This one is pretty unique, shows a style I haven't really seen before so good job there.
but I'm afraid there isn't anything else in this replay that really stuck out for me, corckscrews were alright, but the choppy movements was a turn off for me.
its going to be a no sorry.
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humshegreshdecap: pretty sweet decap is all I can say really, style was pretty cool as well.
Transition was rather weak though.
split cappy: Opener was strange, wasn't a fan. I thought the transition was smooth though, very good. Split and decap were great and worked well together, but again your transition wasn't the best after that and kinda brought down the replay for me.
peh: I didn't like this one at all to be honest with you, the manip wasn't too good and the decap was alright but nor ormo standards :c
all in all, you have a good style apply it to all you replays! The thing you need to work on most is transitioning because those tend to be stiff and unappealing.
Its going to be a no for now.
Last edited by MrJingles; Apr 3, 2014 at 04:52 AM.
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If you want everyone in this org making the same exact super slow spinning in one direction replays then i guess you are doing a good job at it. All of my replays are done in one sitting at 1 turnframe, so if your definition of "smooth" means moving like a retarded slug on a my movements will never be "smooth", although i could work on my hit accuracy . I want to express a U N I Q E style, not something you see everyday on youtube.
thanks for considering me and the CnC though
thanks for considering me and the CnC though
Last edited by poop; Apr 3, 2014 at 08:47 AM.
