Alright hey there Chazer, Imma go ahead and cnc your spar with Chaos.
The opener/launch was pretty cool, even if it's a little overused. I can't help but you
could have spun a little faster, but hey, it worked out pretty well. I really like the landing
and the roll, flowed really well together. It sorta goes downhill from there, though.
The turnaround was a little jumpy, and you had a perfect change to kick, but you didn't for
some reason. You just standing there with the other play cuddling your thigh was a little
weird, and the punches were really slow and weak. You're kinda entangled in eachother
for a moment, but the kick was alright. The launch after you push apart should have
had more momentum in the spin, and it shows with how weak the kick was.
ko was alright.
Fine Jisse: I will cnc SunChaos as well, alright? Problem solved.
The opener was okay, I didn't really like how you sorta twiched into running.
The first kick looked alright, too bad it missed, though that's not really an issue.
The launch and second kick looked really nice, though the position for the
punches could have been better. The punches themselves were alright. I like
the recovery you did, swift and a perfect position for the launch, which was
nice as well. The kick looked pretty cool, it's too bad your opponent messed
it up somewhat. The recovery was nice, though ghosting's a nono.
Last kick was nice, pose could have been better.
Alright, here's my latest spar with Sprytryne, and I did screw up the beginning a bit with that
up and down movement of the arm, but on the whole I think it's a pretty good replay.
Also it is a whole spar, I just got lazy and didn't want to pose or anything
Last edited by Nearly; Nov 25, 2012 at 06:57 AM.