Originally Posted by
Cat
this is my second time applying thanks, plus i got accepted the first time but i feel like im getting worse so i left
ok
I don't remember you leaving...
anyway,
snizzysnap: generic opener, the way your arm and chest moved during the setup of the launch that made you move pretty awkwardly... nothing much to say about the next part, standard wide angle kick rotating chest to make a punch to the torso to launch it up but wait you didn't punch no you reached farther and grabbed ukes wrist to pull it down to get a boomhit with your shin, and while I try not to discriminate the angle of that shin bash was kinda awkward looking. back kicked ukes crotch and got a two dm but then you widened your legs again to get a good angle to throw ukes head at his body or something, then hit the dismembered leg and swept it up into your face, which doesn't look nice imo.
bap: there it is with moving that arm forward first and then swinging your chest around, with your raised leg and the other one pushing against your whole upper body. looks kinda ech to me you know? there's not a whole lot to comment on here.. I didn't like that you grabbed too early when reaching for ukes elbow, you being so close to ukes torso and the position you're in is eh, skeet wasn't amaererzering. htjnfgfd.
boom: another generic opener, kinda robotic movement there in the..... someone else can cnc the manip because gosh dang I'm really biased against them and blah blah someone else.
you should've used your newer replays they're kinda better you know anyway it's a no from me sorry.
