short answer no. flow seems slightly choppy is some situations, and while the stuff here isn't bad in the slightest there's not a whole lot amazing and whatnot.
chiky chiky nerd whatever: slightly generic opener leading into a predictable launch/spin (I CAN SMELL THE IRONY EXUDING MY PORES.) leg twitched pretty badly around frames 410, your body was kinda weirdly positioned on that first kick, but the dms were executed fairly nicely. it's a pretty straightforward replay, not too much to prattle on about.
streams stalty: opener was awkward and slow, average transition to the punch setup, and this is might be just me but I really liked the movement after that split, second punch and skeet looked really nice. kinda falls downhill from there, your leg twitches getting into launch position, the twist itself is... odd, and I'm not sure if thats a good odd or a bad odd, transition to pose was ehhh.
my life's earnings: opener isn't worth mentioning really, left leg twitch at around 940 is eh, blah blah I don't really like how you handled yourself when you were upside down, probably could have made something smoother, but after that the manip was really pretty good, I'm amazed you didn't hit your head or something. I don't really like that movement around 460, leg coming up a bit prematurely, doesn't look nice, and the way you suddenly switch directions twice before that boomhit was eh.
so no work on the wrinkles on yeah do the thing go you.
