Originally Posted by
iFred
Is that enough?
I say
no sorry. :c
your idea is great, but your movement was jittery and at times, stiff.
Shook wants us to recruit those who'd replays can blast our socks off, and yours just didn't make the cut in my opinion. I can see you getting in ormo in probably less than a month if you just work on movement and a little bit on dms.
Keep those great ideas flowing, and I hope to see you in the future so I can judge again! o7