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manlypotato: I've told you this before, but it's a No. You're still not ready yet. You need to develop your movement first. Sure you can sit here and dismember and boom, but everything looks so.. bland? like, there's nothing there. You're not generating speed from what you put out, and your movement in general looks like you're moving every 10 frames.
You have shift + p for a reason, use it to your advantage.

try again later

One thing to add manlypotato, Split into torso boom = snore
I do see improvement though you are still really close you just need to work on your movement and creativity in a replay and you're set.

I am changing 2 of my replays, if it is possible.

I'm sorry we need 3 new replays :c

but you can add those 2 new replays, and then make a third new replay

I dont think you understand. I already posted the ДnewД app, i just changed 2 replays, although i made a knew one adn atached it .

Yay.

I don't put much effort in my replaymaking but if I actually do it will be really better than normal. gg ormo deny me nao.

long story short its a no
ill just do a quick summary of what you should work on

control during openers (aka not looking like your floating or gravity is taking you down)

not hitting your head

twitching



Ok I see some improvement since last time I saw you apply so that's cool
It's all really standard I think that's the best way to put it.
you have some nice parts in your replay but then the rest of the replay isn't as good
so yeah its a no : (

Your so close man I think if you replace the first replay with a really good one I think its a yes.



roland one time a wise jingles once said

but yeah its a no
you kinda sorta had something in the last replay it was better then the other two but still not ' w0w '

tip: your effort is directly proportinal to ours

Yes I realised that, but the fact that I don't have any inspiration to actually work hard on my replays, but I plan on making 2 hour+ replays in the future.