That was really good Dalir.
Constructive Criticism:
You start off real fast, so when you make a slight slow down or cannot
dismember a joint quick enough it gets quite slow, even though it isn't, if you understand my meaning.
What im trying to say is.. You start off too fast. In that replay at least.
Way to improve:
You should start slow and quicken the pace throughout the replay.
or
Start quick and maintain/quicken the pace throughout the replay.
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(P.S. It'd be cool if everyone used this format.)