Yay, my turn.
Bangarang - The opener was pretty awkward. It had potential, but you messed it up.
The transition to the first boomhit was way too long, and the hit didn't look powerful at all.
The spin slap was probably the only thing I liked about this replay. It was fast but not too powerful. The slap and the kick after that both had potential, but you didn't excecute them properly.
Buildup - Opener again, could've been far better.
The launch was pretty weird, I didn't like the way that looked at all. The groin kick to decap was alright. It could've worked better if you made a splitcap out of this. Kick was powerful at least, but the ending was seriously floaty.
Yiuhh, opener was better this time. Hip kick was alright, but you should've followed through with it more. The 2dm punch to the chest dm was nice, only because it was fast. Everything after that was terrible.
Work on getting more power into your hits, aside from a couple good hits, most of them are pretty weak. Work on learning how to control your movements better, and flesh out your style a lot more.
The only good point I've seen in your replays is that you don't twitch, however your movements are fairly basic.
Bangarang - The opener was pretty awkward. It had potential, but you messed it up.
The transition to the first boomhit was way too long, and the hit didn't look powerful at all.
The spin slap was probably the only thing I liked about this replay. It was fast but not too powerful. The slap and the kick after that both had potential, but you didn't excecute them properly.
Buildup - Opener again, could've been far better.
The launch was pretty weird, I didn't like the way that looked at all. The groin kick to decap was alright. It could've worked better if you made a splitcap out of this. Kick was powerful at least, but the ending was seriously floaty.
Yiuhh, opener was better this time. Hip kick was alright, but you should've followed through with it more. The 2dm punch to the chest dm was nice, only because it was fast. Everything after that was terrible.
Work on getting more power into your hits, aside from a couple good hits, most of them are pretty weak. Work on learning how to control your movements better, and flesh out your style a lot more.
The only good point I've seen in your replays is that you don't twitch, however your movements are fairly basic.
umg
im not worthy of ormus
might as well get some cnc and possibly get in
changed one of my replays
if you guise don mand
im not worthy of ormus
might as well get some cnc and possibly get in
changed one of my replays
if you guise don mand
Last edited by jclark; Sep 5, 2013 at 05:59 AM.
Have a great day, thanks for looking at this post I guess.
cnc is an endangered resource
cnc is an endangered resource
