Hate to be the party pooper here Wiarcik, but I didn't like your application to be honest,
Your overall movement was pretty bad for the first 2 replays, and kind of choppy. Hits kind were meh.
Your flow wasn't there, and that is what brought down the look of those two replays.
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Your last replay however was pretty good.
movement was surprisingly much better in this replay, and the hits were well done.
make another replay like the 3rd one, and you can have my yes.
Your overall movement was pretty bad for the first 2 replays, and kind of choppy. Hits kind were meh.
Your flow wasn't there, and that is what brought down the look of those two replays.
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Your last replay however was pretty good.
movement was surprisingly much better in this replay, and the hits were well done.
make another replay like the 3rd one, and you can have my yes.
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Circus Anthem: Not really any outstanding flaws in movement here, it seems to be alrightish all throughout.
Humanoidal disguise: The opening was decent, but the movement just before the kick and during wasn't the best. Then he was again a bit stiff after the kick it kind of looked like he held all to me. Also didn't really like that he grabbed the arm for like 3 seconds then pushed it off, it seemed to me like he was going to do something there but he forgot about it and left it in by accident. The transition to the pose was eh, and his poses always seem to be lifeless. But really all he needs to do is relax a few joints here and there.
I mean its not bad (poor choice of words on my part :c), but I want to see him make something like his last replay were movement was not an issue. And that shouldn't be too hard since everything else seems to be in order.
Humanoidal disguise: The opening was decent, but the movement just before the kick and during wasn't the best. Then he was again a bit stiff after the kick it kind of looked like he held all to me. Also didn't really like that he grabbed the arm for like 3 seconds then pushed it off, it seemed to me like he was going to do something there but he forgot about it and left it in by accident. The transition to the pose was eh, and his poses always seem to be lifeless. But really all he needs to do is relax a few joints here and there.
I mean its not bad (poor choice of words on my part :c), but I want to see him make something like his last replay were movement was not an issue. And that shouldn't be too hard since everything else seems to be in order.
Last edited by MrJingles; Mar 14, 2013 at 12:33 AM.
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I agree with Jingles on this one. Wiarcik is good, but I'd like to see one more replay from him.
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0600Hours:
Raindown: I see that your tori didn't start in the normal T-shaped formation, but it's alright. The hand throw was neat, it was pretty powerful. The way you moved towards uke was unrealistic, but I like it (I'm more of a -9.82 guy, but I believe -30 gravity is used for being realistic and etc.). Kick was sloppy, your shin hit uke instead of your foot but it was darn powerful, getting a 4-DM boom. The part after this I don't like, because your body looked like it was laying on the ground, uke's leg was just hitting you, making it look sloppy. Second kick was nice, not too shabby, skeet was really great. That's what makes this replay pretty good.
DogFight: Generic uke lift here, and a punch to keep uke in the air, nothing to original, unlike the replay earlier. Around frame 390, your body looked really stiff, with your legs contracted and your left arm just contracted throughout the jump. Punch was great, but try to avoid hitting your head on uke, it makes the replay, dare I say, sloppy. Skeet was sweet, it was well-aimed and powerful.
1-2 Skeet: I love simple openers like these. Punch was alright, and the following butt-to-head decap was great, and you kept the flow, too. I loved how you just popped off your head then kicked it into the sky, very creative. The head skeet was great, and the hand skeet after that was sweet, too. This replay is sex, very original and creative, though not much destruction.
You're close, but you need to lessen your stiffness and practice your destruction and cleanliness.
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0600Hours:
Raindown: I see that your tori didn't start in the normal T-shaped formation, but it's alright. The hand throw was neat, it was pretty powerful. The way you moved towards uke was unrealistic, but I like it (I'm more of a -9.82 guy, but I believe -30 gravity is used for being realistic and etc.). Kick was sloppy, your shin hit uke instead of your foot but it was darn powerful, getting a 4-DM boom. The part after this I don't like, because your body looked like it was laying on the ground, uke's leg was just hitting you, making it look sloppy. Second kick was nice, not too shabby, skeet was really great. That's what makes this replay pretty good.
DogFight: Generic uke lift here, and a punch to keep uke in the air, nothing to original, unlike the replay earlier. Around frame 390, your body looked really stiff, with your legs contracted and your left arm just contracted throughout the jump. Punch was great, but try to avoid hitting your head on uke, it makes the replay, dare I say, sloppy. Skeet was sweet, it was well-aimed and powerful.
1-2 Skeet: I love simple openers like these. Punch was alright, and the following butt-to-head decap was great, and you kept the flow, too. I loved how you just popped off your head then kicked it into the sky, very creative. The head skeet was great, and the hand skeet after that was sweet, too. This replay is sex, very original and creative, though not much destruction.
You're close, but you need to lessen your stiffness and practice your destruction and cleanliness.
Last edited by Luminusian; Mar 17, 2013 at 03:10 PM.
yeah ok
