Uh, well, yeah.
Pretty much everything about this should be redone if you think it deserves to be in the tricktionary. Opener is unrealistic, nothing flows, your spins aren't even close to human form and don't carry enough torque, the kick was off-balance, and idk why you even rolled.
Seriously I can see that you want to be in the tricktionary but it's going to take a lot more practice because let's just be honest here, you aren't at that level yet. So, best case scenario, you practice a lot for like a couple months or so, come back, and try again. Just give yourself more time, it takes a lot more practice then what you're giving it.