Hey, Whale.
The less I know is better:
Opener was quirky and twitchy, but has a likeable approach to it.
DMs were lackluster, but satisfying because done consecutively.
Nice erratic relax manip.
I'd give it a 5.8/10.
The one that I rely on:
I really liked the opener.
Punch to the knee was fine, but ruined it a li'l for me.
2nd kick and boom was really beautiful, but you could've made more DMs with it.
Pose was ehh.
7.3/10
Parallel Lines:
Damn, you did good with the opener.
Then you zero'd out because you didn't get a boom.
Less twitch, more flow with this one.
Liked it. 7.7/10
Music for the deaf:
Opener was on moderate speed, nice.
Split could've gotten a boom, but better if you didn't which was nice.
That turn for decap could've gotten a boom.
Punch was badly aimed, you could've gotten another boom with this one.
That sudden stop for crotch kick was just not fitting imo.
I think you should've maintained the grab and went for a back kick, I think it would've gotten you a crotch boom with flow.
Transition to glute tap made me lol.
Pose was okay. Giving you 4.7/10 for this one, sorry.