Dark Paradise was bugging me,so I edited it
I like this one waay better.
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Also made a decap
CnC would be appreciated.

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I am overall not a fan of drama queen, the movement was too stiff and just boring overall.

Dark Paradise is alright but you could have made your hits look much more powerful.

Again good work but try mixing it up a bit.

I'm working on some new replays. and I know that the opener sucks but I was screwing around. I need Some opinions on which of the dix is better :)

bump

new replay. some cnc would be nice :)

The opener was decent but was a bit slow/stiff. I hated the arm dm and transition to the kick. You could have made it a lot smoother by reaching around a bit premature and following with a strong kick. The jump after that was impressive and I was a fan of that kick.. UNTIL you immediately contracted it. The punches ruined the flow and the transition into your pose was twitchy as all hell and the pose itself was nice. Good job, keep workin at it!

Flap: Your style is interesting, as Eal said it's pretty twitchy but your movements look nice and fast. Work on your fluidity and try to keep your shoulders in a more relaxed and natural state, they look really stiff.

Also get booms. Booms are cool.

thanks guys,this replay wasn't meant to be fluid soo yeah. But i appreciate it

tried some -9.82
not to happy about it but I'll post them anyway