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That one was a little old, and kind of a "just for the hell of it" replay, but thanks.

A little more of a recent one:
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Bumping with another replay.

Been working on a style, think I found it for the most part. It's a tricking replay.

CnC would be very much appreciated, doesn't have to be nice. Thank you.
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Blargh.

Bumping with my first self spar.
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Bump.
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It was good, I enjoyed watching it. You kept your flow throughout it very well, and the hits which connected were nice and solid. At the ending you probably could have jumped the entire way to decap. The double jump to get into position turned me off a little.
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Originally Posted by Assazin View Post

CnC would be very much appreciated, doesn't have to be nice. Thank you.



Lone Road
Started of fine but awkward arm movements at frames around 620.
The spin and kick shiz however, was clean and looked good.
Transition and next spin was coolio and landing aswell.
However the spin at 400 lost alot of momentum and I would much rather like to see a flip after two spins.
And after that you decided to do another spin(flip already) wich was all in all fine.
The punchy ending and pose was a nice addition, I liked that.
Gj Ass.
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Thanks for the comments guys.

I somehow forgot to post these ones, give them a look perhaps?

Hi Rawb.
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The first one was good, the first part did seem a bit stiff but I actually liked how you spun Uke on your head for a few frames during the manip.
About the manip itself, you kinda shifted the flow a bit near the end of it, and besides the manip was a tad messy.
The first boomhit was solid, the second one not so much. I would have gone for something different if I were you.
The transition to the pose was great though.

One the second replay, the manip was good, but it was messy once again.
The split cap was excellent, and the next hit may not be very well aimed but I did like it. Nice one.
oh yeah
A La Rawb

Wah, stop touching with your head during manips. It looks weird.
However the manip all in all looked really good.(As do all of your other manips.)
Seemed like a bit of struggle to actually get the spin going but you managed to pull it off just fine.
As Pusga said the splitcap is so fucking great, really liked it.
Last hit was meh, weird aim and not very enjoyable to watch. Especially not after the splitcap.
The fall down and pose looked good.
Great replay. ^^
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Thanks for your feedback guys.

When I get home I'll edit this post later, just wanted to say thanks.

I edited the last kick for the manip (gave uke my foot instead of my shin).
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