Originally Posted by
Falzar09
Well,count,there are some things you have to improve.First one is the flow of your moves.You have to make your moves more clean and relaxed.Dunno why,but some moves made me think that youre moving like a robot.Second problem is the speed of the moves.You wait too much between your kicks and dms and you move a little too slow.And finnaly,the pose.I already told you that most poses are standing poses,on feet or sitting poses.Your pose doesnt really like a good pose but it isnt really bad for the start.
Anyway,I dont say that everything looks bad in the replay but I say that you could improve it very much.
that's why it's still a wip..
anyway thanks for your tips. I know how a pose looks like, that's not the point. But I think rather than posing and falling down like shit I prefer to keep a poose near the ground.
but still working on this.
#edit: made another short replay, same conditions (-30 grav, 1000 frames, 250 dist).
cant get the pose correctly, can someone help me with this pls?
the replay itself isnt rly the important point here, but still critics would be nice
Last edited by count3rl33; Dec 22, 2011 at 12:28 AM.