I'm going to go ahead and review wes' app, because tricking.
Most important things to make a good tricking replay:
-Doing something that was never/was hardly ever done
-Doing a nice combo with all the details polished
By details I mean focussing on stuff like the setup, the landing and transitions.
Aerial to Full: It's a simple combo, so you need to focus on the details, like doing the whole 180º spin on the aerial, not ghosting your legs during the backfull/fullwist, and landing properly. If you're going to land so leaned to the front that your head is almost bumping into the ground, you can at least do a missleg to make it work, but since misslegs are pretty hard you can just try and get more horizontal axis rotation. The toe-jump could be argued, but in my opinion it's more of a ultra-realism kind of detail, since feet in Toribash don't have toes and it's harder to simulate the takeoff properly.
Cork ST Moon Kick: The initial run on this one was more sloppy, but the set up for the cork was pretty genius. You were going all nice and well with the cork, but then you ghosted your arm through your leg, didn't spin the last 180º on the vertical axis of the cork, and landed way too leaned back in an unnatural position. The landing then affected the transition to the "moon kick" which was more of a gainer than anything. You can't call that extending of leg near frame 83 a hook, you need more amplitude in it: example of proper moonkick http://www.club540.com/trick/moon-kick . Also, on the landing of the moonkick you suddenly became too stiff.
Overall, bump up the complexity of the tricks or focus more on the details. You're right on the transtion to being a really good tricker, so take a bit of time and make something that'll really make you stand out. It's a no for now.
Most important things to make a good tricking replay:
-Doing something that was never/was hardly ever done
-Doing a nice combo with all the details polished
By details I mean focussing on stuff like the setup, the landing and transitions.
Aerial to Full: It's a simple combo, so you need to focus on the details, like doing the whole 180º spin on the aerial, not ghosting your legs during the backfull/fullwist, and landing properly. If you're going to land so leaned to the front that your head is almost bumping into the ground, you can at least do a missleg to make it work, but since misslegs are pretty hard you can just try and get more horizontal axis rotation. The toe-jump could be argued, but in my opinion it's more of a ultra-realism kind of detail, since feet in Toribash don't have toes and it's harder to simulate the takeoff properly.
Cork ST Moon Kick: The initial run on this one was more sloppy, but the set up for the cork was pretty genius. You were going all nice and well with the cork, but then you ghosted your arm through your leg, didn't spin the last 180º on the vertical axis of the cork, and landed way too leaned back in an unnatural position. The landing then affected the transition to the "moon kick" which was more of a gainer than anything. You can't call that extending of leg near frame 83 a hook, you need more amplitude in it: example of proper moonkick http://www.club540.com/trick/moon-kick . Also, on the landing of the moonkick you suddenly became too stiff.
Overall, bump up the complexity of the tricks or focus more on the details. You're right on the transtion to being a really good tricker, so take a bit of time and make something that'll really make you stand out. It's a no for now.
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