Thank you for accepting me.
I'm very happy.

I kinda chose: "Flowly and Destructive" style.

Here's an example:

Patrickooo, man, let me explain it to you like this:
About the style - you must design your style. Be creative.
You have some sort of style, but it's not on the ready level.
Try making something more hard. Not just a massive destroy, but with a long skeet, perhaps.

"Long skeet"

Like this?

Pat, what he is trying to say.
You don't have an style, since you do everything to get destruction.
You don't have any additional movement which improves the way to destruction.

See what I'm saying?

Then is that the only problem that I got? So I can fix it...

Patrickooo, indeed you can.
Take your time.

Datskip:

Uppercut:Opener was very original, but you killed the flow. The hits were good, but you were all over the place, and twitching was a problem before and hits many of the hits.

Slap: This one was alright. The spin and first punch was alrightish, the hit itself was decent. But your body looked so awkward when it, pause at 325. Does that look powerful? No. try relaxing body parts such as the knees and elbows and keep the glutes a normal distance apart unless you are going for a trick or spin or whatever.

Kick2: It was meh, nothing really much to say here.


You're getting there, just keep at it and maybe one day you'll make it in.


Patrickooo: Listen to the other posts, work on style. It can be just as important as destruction.


No to both.

(man am I a party pooper or what)

If don't get in at least give me CnC about my replays. Thank you for considering me.

1st replay: Blue_Spins is a decap replay.

2nd replay:Blue_Fire is a madman replay.

3rd replay:Blue_Icicle is a madman replay as well.

I would like to thank you for having the time to read this. Belated Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year!

I know it isn't too good to post more straight away, but I've been making some replays whilst waiting for a reply.
Dynamite - Split, with an added punch
Rawr - Decap
Stay Still! - Madman
Also, do you have any tips to keep the flow going if a punch/kick makes you lose your momentum?