Originally Posted by
Kazu
hi
first one:
7/10
looks quite stiff, the intention you had is good, but it can't look well with the gravity youre using.
anways, it looks more like you attempted to do something but failed over and over, while doing nothing certain in particular.
the dm's are nice, but you gotta work at those moves to make them way more smooth so it looks a tad more realistic.
second one:
7/10 aswell
pretty much the same as in the first one, looks quite a bit too stiff, if you had moved the legs a bit more in the rotations it would have looked smoother and it would have more flow in general, the dm's again are well done.
all in all, work a bit on the movement you have, maybe try out -20 grav as it looks it would suit you more, escpially as it would make the moves you attempt, look way more smooth.