59FIFTY: Try to make every attack DM a part of Uke. Don't use grabhits to DM as much as possible, either. Grabhits are bad. It's good to see that you're relaxed at first, but press C when too many of your joints are contracted/extended because you usually become stiff halfway through the replays. And just keep on making replays, that's the best way to improve.
For some reason I can't watch Cloren's replays :s