Originally Posted by
Arakata
thanks onsola... i am poor and lazy to get tcs. i will get 500 maybe.
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lets make replays
What you think onsola?
I'm not onsola but I give a try.
Puf in Duf:
You did it nice.
The problem is Uke doesn't need to do nothing, and he grabbed your leg, because you know you edited it. You got some traspass with your calf and hand
9/10
Rabius Parabius
Great.
You know, to add the rabia verb(I think it's a verb, lol) and do 3 DMs is not the correct. The replay doesn't have the theme of the name, If you know what I mean.
Opener was good, but when you did the jump it was hold all, so try to move knees or something to make your spin more fast. You've did a good work with the DMs
9.5/10
GForce U.P1
Incredible.
This would have been "Rabius Parabius", you know.
Pretty nice, you started opener with calm, some like slow moves, you did decap then your Tori raged so hard that you destroyed Uke's legs.
Nothing to say, no stiff, good movements, done.
10/10
Road to Decap
Seems good.
Nothing to say too, It's perfect.
Maybe you changed the routine of your movement, like you was going to the left and you changed fast to right to hit uke.
10/10