Well, you have potential to make destructive madmans. I'm not a recruiter, so just take my opinion.
I'll CnC madman considering that one was the least... dare I say, crappy. The opener was decent as well as the split. When you kicked the hand to tip him and get a better grab, I thought that looked pretty boss. But then you only got a 2DM with the arms. It was dissapointing. Everything else after that wasn't very pretty, as well as the pose.
Get some flow, try harder, and try skeeting some more (not that necessary, but it shows talent). If it was up to me, I'd say no for now.
You'll have to wait for a recruiters answer. Who knows, they might have a different opinion than I do.