Using "Sir" does not make what ever you write proper, nor sophisticated. Implying that you have perfect grammar, and not even showing correct use of capital letters at the beginning of a sentence, using a capital I when referring to one self and not grasping the use of a comma reflects very poorly over you.
I liked the fact that you tried to make an original application, that was a big plus, but it feels like you're still not very mature.
Judging by your join date, Qi and forum posts, it would seem you spend several hours a day in multi-player, probably in private matches. That's cool, you probably know how to kick some ass in Aikido, Judo, Wushu or what ever it is you play. But 34 forum posts? It doesn't seem as if you're a very forum active person, your grammar and the general way you type also leads me to think you've not had too much forum experience. And doc is a forum/IRC based clan.
If you learned how to type and improved your grammar I'm sure you could have a good time here though. And I think this would be a cool place for you to learn, studying how us other doc members write, and basically mimicking it would probably have good results for you on the forums, and possibly in school.
Some information I missed is how old you are, and possibly your name if you're comfortable sharing it.
Now moving on to the accepted or rejected part. As it is now, I would not let you in, BUT, I am giving you a chance to get in the clan, because I think it would be a good learning experience for you, and maybe after a while we could be proud to have you as a member of this clan.
What I want you to do, is write a few paragraphs, 100+ words, about your views on the death penalty, and why you think it's either right, or wrong. If I see anything copy/pasted you will be instantly rejected. If you do well and I see you are capable of presenting arguments in a professional manner, I might just contemplate letting you in after discussing it with the other leaders.
Thanks,
Bust3r