Aw, damnit. Also, you changed up your sig quite a bit, I see.

Where do you work? And how old are you and Corey?

I noticed that pretty much nobody has a writing thread or anything like it. So, basically, this is a thread to post any of your writing for fellow clan members to critique- it can be school-related or just for fun. Also post your favorite authors and books, etc.

I'll post a whole portfolio if I can get one together, but for now--


An ending to the short story Hills Like White Elephants, by Ernest Hemingway (click the title for the original story.
http://www.box.net/shared/jotdadfp0r

Yeh, it's longer now.
I work at a dairy just down the road from me. 12 hours average each week at minimum wage. It's not much, but it's enough.
We are both 16. My BDay is in July and his is in November.
You?

July birthdays FTW, I'm 15 and have no job yet. Hoping to get one at the local supermarket this summer, see if I can juggle college, a job, and paying for my car insurance.

Well, I don't have college, only high school. I don't own a car, because I simply wouldn't be able to bear living with myself if I failed the learners test. And work is fun!

she was pretty original gangster to be honest.

Thanks bro.

Sorry for the invade but on the topic, the last time I talked to Zap she was in trouble with the law. I'm worried and I miss her :|

Don't have a car? WOT WOT WOT

I haven't even tried for my learners.