Hey, there's nothing wrong with his English. In my opinion, it's perfect, aside from a few missing commas and some misplaced words (but it's not like the words he chose were way off). I think the only thing that threw some people off was his strange paragraph structure, which isn't really a big deal. I'm a stickler for a good application, but Nilo's application wasn't poor as far as grammar was concerned. Rather, it was just fairly short and lacking in content.
If Pie says he's good in game, that's fine. I'd just like to know a little more about his personal life. What grade is he in? How well does he do in school? Does he have any extra curricular activities? What does he do in his free time? Does he like any other video games? Why did he choose Nitro?
Those are a few questions that would be good if they were answered. Best of luck!
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Also, I'm starting to think that it's not a good idea for people to post where they're from in their applications. I feel like applicants who are from non-English speaking countries tell us their nationality in their application, but are then scrutinized more heavily to see if their English is adequate. Because yes, I do think that when somebody tells us their nationality, judges will reread the application specifically looking for grammatical errors. Besides, it's not like all of us have perfect English anyway. All of this is coming from someone who
thinks he has one of the most advanced English levels in the clan.
Last edited by SkyWhale; May 31, 2015 at 05:09 PM.
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