Originally Posted by 8OJ4N

Well, for the first it was a great effort. In the future I suggest using some kind of vector-based program or paths in gimp for the shapes that need to be crisp. Also, I don't like smudging, it's cheep. But u are good in mapping department so it's a plus!
And colors fits.
It's good that u always can work on your set, re-done it, part by part, and improve as time past.
5/10.

Originally Posted by vexon459

Ok, ready for some critisism

here I go

-shading-from what I can see, there is little to no shading, need to change that, anything without shading is crap
-style-needs to keep the same style throughout the set, the head doesn't match the arms or legs, arms don't match head or legs, and legs don't match head or arms
-copy-try to be unique, don't base your work off of someone elses, show so e creativity
-technical stuff -_-
1. Eyepatch-do you see that the string goes to the back but then just stops, you need to connect them
2. Tool choice-looks like you just threw a light color on it then did a smudge spam, not good, try to make batter choices
Lastly,3. Overall, it needs to be cleaner, as you can see, lines are not straight or regularly curved, they look like they were drawn on

I give it a 4/10 (sorry if I'm too harsh, but there is my reasoning ^^^)