Toribash
Originally Posted by Tempo View Post
I severely dislike the endings. No pose? You NEED one to top off your work.

However, the replays were pretty good. I like the intense destruction and powerful boomhits. You look slightly stiff at times but I barely noticed it.

As for me I'd give you a yes, if you start making poses in the end. But hey, I'm not a recruiter. You have my seal of approval though.

Hey, thanks Tempo. I guess we'll just wait for a recruiter then.
And yeah, poses aren't really my strongest point, but I can work on it.
League of Legends NA: Locus
ORMO, notnoob, made some good replays now.
Harder, more stylish, more intresting.
http://www.mediafire.com/?767c6tf7d314wjd
Added to mediafire just in case something lags on the forum.
I'm already a good replay maker with some reputation.
But that doesn't mean I'll stop becoming better and better.
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http://www.mediafire.com/?5nyuw96y84kfyyu
Edited the 1st replay (!Last and Found)
Made a corkscrew out of the last jump.
Last edited by Lexx; Aug 28, 2011 at 09:18 PM.
"Philosophy of mankind are pink dreams of a blue planet" ~Lexx
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Sorry for be boring
Hy, and sorry for be boring but i rly want to enter on ORMO.
Pls check my new replayss, i follow maybe "all the ruless"
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Lexx,

First replay: The jump at the start was ok, but you broke the flow around frame 788 which made the replay look quite rough. The first spin was alright yet it still could be improved, since your torso looked a bit twisted during the spin. The round off was horrible in my opinion since the glutes were too close together. Oh and the gainer was slightly slanted or whatever you were attempting to do there.

Anyway I didn't look at the version with the cork but it wouldn't of made that much difference due to the round off.

Second replay:

Going to be honest with you the start was awful because it was too relaxed with extremely stiff parts as well, but the hypertwist would of been actually pretty good if you didn't raise your shoulder near the end to get to the transition to the pose. Oh, and one thing you should of done is to do the hypertwist without digging your leg into the ground, since it would of been way better than way.
The rest of the replay was fine though I guess.

Third replay: Not much to say about it, it is creative and the best out of the 3 replays you made. Only major flaw really is the pose.

Currently a no from me, but better than your other apps in my opinion.

Everyone else, ask another recruiter.
Sold my dog to join RRO
Hello guys.
I'm applying for the secound time to ORMO, hope this time i get in or at least get some good replies.
If the 2nd replay only shows the first 300 frames, tell me that i will upload it again.
http://www.2shared.com/file/uKDTH3f4...a_monster.html
http://www.2shared.com/file/ywkfTYlR/0__Dreams.html
http://www.2shared.com/file/w1tZfvhr/0_Waves.html
Do you really think you're in control
Originally Posted by chaossook View Post
Hey. Applying again, starting to think you guys might be getting sick of seeing me. =D

Bam - Madman/Boom/Skeet
Friend V3 - Madman/Booms/Skeets
Sty - Madman/Booms

I'm just requoting it in case you guys missed it. Page 215.
League of Legends NA: Locus
Notnoob, changed the 1st replay to the cork, cause I changed the scoot out there aswell.
Perhaps, you should take a look before criticising it so much.
2nd replay, do you realize that it had a double b-twist without any speed-up?
Because I showed a hypertwist long time ago.
The start was made back in 2009, but it actually gave me a pretty nice momentum to make a double b-twist.
3rd replay is imo the worst of all of mine replays. It contained one dismemberment on uke and I landed it without any intention.
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Oh btw, Notnoob, lets make it clear to you, what a round-off is.
http://www.mediafire.com/?cmuzbobfr31hlt8
If you don't even know what you're talking about, why going into the recruiters?
Or is it that you hate me for something, as a lot of people do, as far as I know.
Last edited by Lexx; Aug 29, 2011 at 06:28 AM.
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