1. Started very well ended terribly. It was all holdy and meved very few joints at a time
2. Looks like you used the started from deadorks kick. Even if you didnt, you couldve done a lot more with that starter
3. You couldve done so much more with that start concept. Ive attatched an edit.
4. Again i think your using deadork's starter, although this was better than the last one, it was still very holdy, and used grab a lot. Try to avoid holding joints, and using grab
5. I actually liked this one. It was strong and nice, but again, way to simple and holdy. Try moving some more joints and relaxing others, also try and do some more damage after the initial hit. Like a decap or something