I didn't see any tricking, more jumping about. :P

Yeah, try some corks and shit.
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also this, cnc please (/me looks at DatSkip)

woah, great!
i loved the boom, good flow, but the pose needs improvement
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also, i have the same styled rpl also, ccpls

Really twitchy and stiff, though was kinda odd how you chose to use the stump to DM.

Interesting, but you should pick up the foot for a skeet at the end. :P

EDIT: Got one for you

oh c: was the foot so close c:
thank you!

someone can give me a reference for a head,not too compliquate too because i''m new in art :s

The God is Great

Oh fien

Opener was kind of stiff and odd, was twitchy how you went for the grab, but it was fast and looked powerful. The kick was good but again stiff, messy how it hit your entire leg. You then kinda curled up into a ball trying to find a way to decap him, where I think you could have thrown the head up to hit later.

The leg DM wasn't really good, it looked more like a tap than a proper hit. Transition to the final hit was decent though a little stiff and the last kick was well done, without grabs. Pose could have been better.

Thoughts?

Still a wip

Flow was alright, though the dragging of your entire leg/arm across Uke throughout the replay was really messy. Too much grab too, imo.
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Flow was good, but the way you kept dragging your entire leg and arm around Uke made it look kinda messy. You were floppy too, try holding/extending your head throughout the replay.

Also,, too much grab.