You need the bridge of the nose on the right side. (The left side if you were the head itself.)
Other than that, looks good so far. Keep it up.

Primary shading is ok.
But the space between the nose and the mouth is too big.
Also, the mouth is suposed to be part human, part robotic.
But not like you did. The metallic part is suposed to be like a jaw, and it also has metallic teeth.
And the stripe above the eye is suposed to be plane...



Other than that it's a pretty cool drawing.
Also, looking foward to the hair. I want to see how you will do that.

hehe thanks for posting :>

about the teeth/jaw i'm having a hard time trying to get it done right :S

i'll try to draw everything human, and then make the robotic above it and delete the botom half of the human, may work :P

about the stripe... I know it's supposed to be plain, but, since it goes over other kinds of shape besides the face, It doesn't feel right to make it plain :S

and i'll have a nice idea for the hair, keep tuned ;P

Today i'll most likely finish the basic shade and start to drop some hard shadows

Yeah, it may work.
Also, the stripe's layer is suposed to be below the metallic parts' layer, isn't it?
From my point of view, it only goes over the face...

hmmm, the reference given to me has it all over the head

here: http://www.lookpictures.net/photos/a...metal-face.jpg

^ Sorry I knew I wouldn't mind anyway. sorry took the pic so fast.thanks Yiazmet &cerburus
I dont mind either way what ever way its looks good. so after this the next cant wait:S

Noot Bad..
Will be Better..
Add Color and will be More Cool..
8/10..

Happens to be a sketch... anyways, looks nice, I am curious to see how it turns out.

Damn thats great. I'm a HUGE mgs fan. I love this head, great detail... You think you could take another mgs request?

^lets just take we both are mgs fans
Also he can get his tablet only on ''weekends''
I requested 2 heads from him :@ might take a while