Toribash
Bad day: All right, it's a good replay. What really makes it look bad though is how all the attacks lack a drawback, and explosive feel, and an aftermath.

Charge up the kick, look at all the joints, "does the kick look better if I extend my hip before starting the kick?"

After the attack, don't just relax stuff. Show us that the kick isn't made of surgical material, show is that it could break a brick wall after it had demolished uke, so keep that knee extended just a few frames before you contract/relax it!

Sorry for late cnc, but guess it's better than no cnc
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^ If you want to look like everyone else, listen to those peeps ^
I personaly love your style keep it up
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thank you guys nothing sets my mood better than cncs of my replays
btw, i'm training my movements
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Whale- Parallel lines.rpl (115.9 KB, 19 views)
Parallel lines: Beautiful movement, do focus on perfecting it.

At frame 373, try to change the direction of the momentum more fluidly, maybe hold the knee? ;)

Also, try to get to a better pose after the decap, which was quite nice btw, maybe a little basic.
Last edited by Swepples; Jan 28, 2016 at 02:41 PM.
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Music For The Deaf
opener was really sweet
the split looks good but also looks like it could have more power in it
decap was meh, i think try to aim for the neck with your foot for decaps (or your hand)
That boom split was SICK
Great crotch kick, looked very powerful!
I don't like how you were on the floor there for a few frames
Where you kinda touched the glute I think you could maybe try and DM it
Pose is cool

8.5/10