Well,count,there are some things you have to improve.First one is the flow of your moves.You have to make your moves more clean and relaxed.Dunno why,but some moves made me think that youre moving like a robot.Second problem is the speed of the moves.You wait too much between your kicks and dms and you move a little too slow.And finnaly,the pose.I already told you that most poses are standing poses,on feet or sitting poses.Your pose doesnt really like a good pose but it isnt really bad for the start.
Anyway,I dont say that everything looks bad in the replay but I say that you could improve it very much.