In your replay Ash, I thin that the grab was unnecessary and you were a bit lazy on the skeet, you should of tried to skeet the head instead of the arm

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Would have looked much better without the self-damage, imo. Made the whole thing look really messy even though it wasn't.

Opener was really cool and I like the transition to the hit, it was really nice and smooth. The kick itself was really powerful but it didn't really look much like a kick. Next two booms flowed nicely and were really fast, good job there. I liked the transition to the final kick, but you were in a really awkward position after that. Pose was good, though.

Also, try to keep your neck straight, it looks really floppy now.