Opener was nice and spinning, liked it.
The lift off looked easy and fun. Pretty good flow too.
I liked how you spinned and kicked. Very nice.
Okay well the second kick wasn't to bad but it looked to simple try to get the force into the other leg for more Dm.
The skeet was cool, I liked how you through it.
And of course pose needs to be worked on.
7/10 Not bad.