17april your twist looks good so far, you just need to follow through with it, don't hold all at the end of the twist, i may be able to show you an example sometime later on.
Ale455 Okay, you need to work on your flow and realism, as well as your moving and jumping needs help. You seem to twitch quite a bit when you move around, i suggest you work on multiplayer sparring and get better at that. Self sparring is really hard to do, focusing on both tori is such a hassle. maybe later on you can work on it.