Primary shading is ok.
But the space between the nose and the mouth is too big.
Also, the mouth is suposed to be part human, part robotic.
But not like you did. The metallic part is suposed to be like a jaw, and it also has metallic teeth.
And the stripe above the eye is suposed to be plane...
Other than that it's a pretty cool drawing.
Also, looking foward to the hair. I want to see how you will do that.
Last edited by Yiazmat; Jan 8, 2012 at 07:34 AM.