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The opener was pretty basic, as were the lift. I've seen them used a lot and probably too often used badly. The kick could've had more lift but it did what it was supposed to.
The transition to the kick was alright, pretty simple and really over-used.
The kick looked nice and solid though, definitely the highlight of the replay.
The ending looked pretty floaty, and you probably could've posed without extending your leg awkwardly.
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Magicspirit wasn't great, it wasn't realistic or had boom or anything, but it had one nice factor. You didn't twitch.
The dms were pretty slow, except for the first two.
The split looked pretty weak, as did the decap. T'was not realistic, but at least you weren't twitchy the way I was at my beginning.
Start me off I liked more, the boom was pretty nice, but the grab turned me off.
The rest was really the same as before
Again the same as before you weren't twitchy, but the downsides were that it wasn't powerful besides the first kick. There was a little bit of flow at parts but beyond that there wasn't much.
No need to comment on this, just thought I'd share it.