Toribash
trying to manip.
it just spiralled out of control so it could only be a quick one

thanks in advance
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#wipthatManip.rpl (148.6 KB, 9 views)
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that title was short lived
well, time to go for another 2 weeks and then do nothing for another 6 months

in the meantime here you go.

don't maul me too hard
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#opener_3.11.rpl (188.3 KB, 16 views)
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it started off really good the lift is fantastic
you pause in the same position for a while and at 300~ you do a twitchy extend knee
you get your left arm in the exact right place but you wait a little too long to raise it
when you do raise and take off it's really cool, just smoothen that decap a little bit

good good
alright guy
extremely short because i'm incapable of doing what is in my head.
Wanted to try and get a double knee but from that way it's quite tricky
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wip2.rpl (122.9 KB, 9 views)
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the opener starts slow then you spring your hand towards uke and turn around and that contrast of speed is not really what you want from an opener
i don't mind that you didn't get the double knee, and the transition into the decap was good
but i don't like the look of the extended right hip with your arms contracted like that
the pose is normal nothing wrong with that

short indeed but it has its charm
alright guy
while thinking about all the booms i forgot how to look good doing the booms
also wouldn't mind some cnc on the above replay as well.

thanks in advance

inb4fudg
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#Opener_1.7.rpl (198.9 KB, 13 views)
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the opener is quite nice,i didn't liked how u lowered/relaxed ur shoulder and than immediately raised it at frame 440. the first kick is nice but the boom,as u said,could done a little bit better for example with a 180/360 degress spin,the transition into the pose is nice and the pose too. overall pretty nice as always,try to make a spin before the boom kick if u can 8.5/10